You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Today, all around the world, where the country is struggling with varied issues within, poverty usually remains on the top for most of the countries. The following essay would highlight some of the reasons and their supposed remedies.
To begin with, for any poor Nation; Unarguably Illiteracy takes the hot spot.
A country with uneducated people, nonskilled people has nothing to add to the economy or growth of the country causing more and more liabilities only resulting in even more crime rates. For example - Statistically proven , Poor countries like Africa has a heartwrneching ratio of uneducated people to literate one causing more and more economic slowdown. Here, Government must provide some basic facilities to the common population to combat this issue like Free education till secondary schools, creating more blue-collar jobs for less educated people would definitely help to bring the number of crime rates and poverty.
Furthermore, Corruption is second another social evil which is pushing countries to more and more poverty. Self-elected, Non skilled , Uneducated, product of nepotism people are often found in the political parties serving nation just for the name of it. They are mostly there just to mint the money, even digesting money which is meant for social development causing more decline to the society's progress. For example - Its not an uncommon sight that so many of the politicians are actually criminals having as serious charge as murders; they barely think about commion man. Due to the this, poor are getting poorer and rich are getting richer. The above-mentioned evil must be intervened by elected government body by holding fair voting systems, making sure that elected people must be skilled enough and has the necessary education, and making regular checks on their doings.
To conclude, though there are many social evils which is dragging back any country economically but regular and mindful checks by respective government can definitely help to eradicate them to a great extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
... barely think about commion man. Due to the this, poor are getting poorer and rich are g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, second, so, for example, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36956521739 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70415258276 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621118012422 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9869399701 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212100660778 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732750419322 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354035560964 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115854402024 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284925254677 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.