In these modern world , it is possible to shop , work, and communicate online without any face-to- face contact with other people . is this a positive or negative developments?
Nowadays in this contemporary society the daily activities of people have been become more convenient for work, communicate, and even for shopping without any face-to-face connection through an internet. Even though, It has its own place in negative and positive aspect but it seems to me that it has equal effects to the society.
First of all, it is a good news that technology is becoming successed to bring an innovation. But, on contrary, crime rate is rising too. People are being helped through a modern products and equipment, however it has brought the illegal activities. Two different unknown or group of people, even including two different nationalities people are able to have a conservation or working for company or even for shopping that is leading to be a massive illegal trade. For example, a few month ago in Nepal, police arrested a group of people who had connected through the internet; Facebook, in involving in the illegal wild animals trade.
However, technology; internet has given a massive amenity to increase the positive mobility of world. In the past, people were bound to survive a life in below poverty line, including, less number of jobs, scarcity of fundamental needs or even without communication. But nowadays, it could be seen in a small number. People are able to save their crucial time as well as creating the innovation through the internet without any connection of other that would be positive development for current society or for upcoming era.
In conclusion, people are able to do whatever they want through the innovation of technology( internet) but, crime rate and illegal activities are rising too along with.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08394160584 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81561005312 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565693430657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6987654187 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210230521563 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650361693811 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665244289155 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12645970478 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756807688383 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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