People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?
Recently, humans have the inclination to do other things instead of sleeping comparing with the past. this essay will discuss reasons why this has occured and examined the consequences of this worrying trend.
Some reasons can shed light on why in the previous time, people used to sleep more than they do now. Firstly, state-of-the-art world can make public immerse in impractical life and at the same time influence the quality of sleep. To be more specific, one spend hours using modern devices before their bedtime or when they want to relax, this activity can affect their demand to sleep as their priority is exerting modern technology. For example, pupils are keen on using their phones, TV, tablets, laptops all time, which let they go to bed late and shortening their sleeping time. Secondly, developing society requires citizens to adapt with the speed of innovation. In addition, they have to work more than they used to do in the past, any profession has the impulse for workers to optimize the productivity, which aims to gain the reformation of the country in all fields; because of this reason, humankind doesn’t have enough time to sleep due to many tasks are waiting them to get more done.
Otherwise, many problems will be discussed completely under this circumstance, following by some feasible effects. First of all, the quality of sleep is able to directly affect to the work’s yield. Particularly, when some don’t get enough sleep, they easily feel tired after waking up and can’t hold conscious spirit during the work process, lead to the bad result in work. Finally, less sleep will make people’s health worse. In other words, sleepless conduces petty illness, impacts many main factors of human’s body and even dismisses the longevity or causes disease relating mentality. For instance, almost children present days wear glasses, some of them have bore supporting eye tools since they were just 4-5 years old as they choose to approach sophisticatedly modern devices very soon and frequently, instead of sleeping as children in the past.
In conclusion, this disturbing problem is attributed to many factors and the influence are also multiple. society must ensure steps are taken to prevent this problems from deteriorating further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63745012658 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608108108108 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.734980738 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.375 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24042286517 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765410239608 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686969051365 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132192577016 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590289787973 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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