Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration. To what consequences can it lead?
Present societies have been significantly influenced by immigration. Every year, the number of people moving to different countries increases continuously. This essay would shed light on how job opportunities and urge for civil security encourages migrants to move and how their life is totally changes economically as well as emotionally thereafter.
To begin with, there are abundant of reasons behind this, why masses are changing their homeland. Eventhough, government enforces numerous opportunities to the people for staying at their native country, yet this trend is increasingly day by day. The first part and parcel reason is that, due to lesser employment facilities, people prefer to migrate from their fatherland to other kingdoms. For instance, according to the survey, it can be found that, In India numerous folks are leaving their country because of lesser work chances. Apart from this, lowest labour wages is also one of the key factor behind this point. If workers do not receive appropriate wages, then they will definitely leave their motherland. To examplify, nurses from the different nations have to leave their motherland, owing to minimum pay scale and they want to set their profession in richest countries like America and Canada. So, these are the causes of immigration.
Moving further, emigration has plethora of results. It has both pros and cons. One of the biggest positive outcome is that, through transfer people become strong financially as well as financially. It is not only beneficially for person, but also for their country and it is like a reward for their country. For example, famous mathematician Ramanujan whose motherland is India, due to his intelligence in the field of mathematics, he is not only famous in their own country, but also in the overseas countries. Apart from positive results, relocation has some disadvantages. Immigration badly influences the population of any nation, in which transfer is continuously increasing. Owing to that, development rate of that nations is decreased. And it is also harmful for those kingdoms in which large number of individuals are living from other overseas. No doubt it has positive effects, yet it is not suitable way.
In compendium, transhumance has both advantages and disadvantages. Excess of anything is not good. Like this, if immigration increses day by day, then it will influence the folks as well as countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , the lowest
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the richest'.
Suggestion: in the richest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30729166667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.990145853 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8890467169 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9166666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0443743932469 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0130702294461 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250496833969 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0317876633273 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155902356286 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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