Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom. Do you agree or disagree
it is indeed a fact that today children enjoy more freedom than in the days of yore. one school of thought says that this is too much, I am inclined to agree so too, as the way they communicate or express their opinions is very much improved and the rate of parents' permission for them to interact with the world also strengthens my opinion.
it is clearly evident from the higher number of medals and achievements by children in the various fields that today parents instead of restricting their children from participating in various contests, now have started motivating them from a very tender age. According to a recent survey, there has been a significant rise (approximately 125%) in the number of children who took admission in any sports or cultural academy in the last decade. Consequently, leading to a freer generation.
Besides this, another reason for this trend is that parents and guardians today set their wards free and give enough time to interact with other people. this also not only enhances their communication skills but social abilities also. In contrast, this never used to be so, as some elderly ones during their discussions say that during their growing years they were never allowed to play outside, they only snuck to do so and are punished when caught.
Furthermore, the fraction of accounts on social media, is a direct proof of the increased rate of freedom that has happened fairly recently, largely belong to age group of 12 to 18 years.
To conclude, I agree that kids nowadays have so much freedom. The way they express themselves, in addition to the leverage of time allowed by parent's social activities further allude to that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, then, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91901408451 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6380807128 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9395764875 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174573234633 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672909451525 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930762852212 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955146490264 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063634485278 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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