Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In some developed countries, the fertility rates are dropping considerably, creating a situation in which maximum working age has to be removed. While this trend brings about some problems stemming from old age, I believe that society can benefit more from the elderly’s knowledge and services.

One of the frequently cited drawbacks is the steep decline in physical prowess. As humans reach higher age, not only are people likely prone to illnesses but also suffer from cognitive impairment, such as dementia to different extents. These health problems could result in low productivity if work i...

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