Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people like to do the thing that they never done, while others prefer to keep doing what they have always done. I support the former attitude because I see as a positive way of thinking and behaving toward life.
To begin with, there are many reasons why people want to do the familiar things day by day. Firstly, some people often feel confident about these things because they consider it easy to do and remember, so they never feel complicated as if they have to do a new thing. According to a recent study, most customer intend to go to the familiar restaurant because they can enjoy their familiar dishes. Moreover, when most of us live in a society which prioritize in the value of the crown, so they scare that they will receive a criticism of them if they try to do a new things. Take Nguyen Ha Dong as a particular example. He was the creator of the first-game of Vietnam called “ flappy bird”, but he received a lot of personal criticism from various people although it didn’t come from the game’s issue.
However, there are a lot of reasons why some people want to try to learn a new thing, and one of them is the effect of globalisation. It is clear that with the appearance of the trend, most people have to be familiar with some such new things so that they can have an new experience in their life. For instance, going to foreign nation is the common thing that local people may use to connect with foreign people. Additionally, when we try to do a new thing, we can have a chance to meet up with some news people for various job in various places, which can create an expected relationship for themselves in the near future.
In conclusion, some people keep doing the same old things to avoid disappointment. However, I like those who have an interest in trying new things because they are more positive about life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
...sons why people want to do the familiar things day by day. Firstly, some people often ...
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Line 2, column 567, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...iticism of them if they try to do a new things. Take Nguyen Ha Dong as a particular ex...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e such new things so that they can have an new experience in their life. For insta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48961424332 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4542445318 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501483679525 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0312816443 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415174852419 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154783683292 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960527365362 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279681728157 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286540771562 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.