With the recent development in technology like e-books some people feel that the printed media like books, newspapers and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that those forms of media will never disappear. Discuss both of the views and give your opinion
screen could be overcomAdvanced technology grows rapidly at all times, some people claim that conventional media will never disappear. However, others point that availability of modern tools including non-physical books will take over physical literature function. Both of views appears to present arguments which will be elaborated in this forthcoming paragraph.
On the one side, opponents of disappearance of printed paper state that its main function is as a relaxation tool. In lieu of facing screens, people breaking in their hectic routines decide on newspaper or tabloid consisting of texts and pictures in interactive colors. This makes people peaceful-minded and reduces eyestrain effects. Furthermore, sense of reader satisfaction can be obtained from touching and smelling the books symbolizing typical peculiarity of papers (unique aroma and texture). Apart from this, such media might offer better sensory experience enabling to be fold and marked.
On the flip side, proponents of this view highlight that electronic media can be accessed easily to find some literature sources on the internet. In regard to being eco-friendly societies, they effortlessly receive the updated news and references; upload and share files by means of reforestation support. In addition, due to digital form development, e-books come with handy to be carried to anywhere since it just needs one single device, such as tablet, to archive a thousand of literatures. Subsequently, people no longer bring heavy load (traditional books) for reading material.
To sump up, it appears to me that technology taking over the printed media function brings advantages not only accessible and eco-friendly but also efficient for public users. This is as long as printed literature remains to be utilized as a comfort media..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, apart from, in addition, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54710144928 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04841516425 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684782608696 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8095623113 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276505162549 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842028551493 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509197280259 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161572067398 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635658452406 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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