Convenience food will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
With the advancement in science and technology, we can now process and preserve food for a much longer period of time. Moreover, some people believe that packed food will eventually replace home-cooked feast. This essay disagrees with the given statement because processed food is not healthy and it will stop the creation of a new recipe.
To begin with, chemicals are added to prolong the life of packed foods, these chemicals even though protect the cuisine just fine , it's not so great for our health. Furthermore, their nutrition value also decreases over time. In addition to that, the majority of people love eating fresh meals,for example, a recent survey conducted by a Youtuber showed that 90% of the total Indian population still prefers freshly cooked food, as they taste much better .
Additionally, no new flavours will be developed if we totally shift to ready-made meals. From ancient times we have come a long way, we have developed new ways to cook food and discovered many new flavours by accident, for instance, let's talk about an Indian cuisine "Sweet shahi paneer", it was discovered by a chef when he accidentally put sugar instead of salt while making "Shahi paneer", and made a whole new recipe. This kind of mistake will not happen while boiling packed meals, as a result, no new recipe will be developed.
To conclude, even though convenience food is much easier and faster to cook, it still cannot be compared to home-cooked supper. As freshly made food is much more healthy and is a way to express love.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69304495201 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642307692308 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.9251260923 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180734291927 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816501034131 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637984756396 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126510924973 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875571669244 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.