Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Governments imposing limitations on the creativity and idea expression of those involved in art is open to debate. From my perspective, artists should have maximum freedom to interpret themselves in their artworks if their ideas do not violate laws, social norms and ethical standards.
Among the supporting reasons for letting artists freely express their thoughts is that freedom is the essence of art. Feeling free, especially emotionally, is a prerequisite condition for artistic creation. Without freedom, there would be no poetry, music, film or painting, and there would also be no inspiration to create works. For instance, we cannot force a writer to write a touching literary work about poverty if he has never experienced or witnessed such a dire circumstance. He needs to gather his own experiences to grieve for such tragic fates; the tears he cries in his creation are, thus, precious. Freedom in artistic creation can also be considered a desire to be free in the artist's destiny. Many artists created poems, music or paintings in the context of social alienation when their country was under domination or even when they were in prison. Their artistic creations at that time were a subjective perspective beyond the challenging circumstance and an objective voice representing a community desiring to live in a fair and just society.
However, boundaries of artistic creativity should be set to a certain extent. Having the function of directing people to Truth - Compassion - Beauty, art must be born to educate people about good and right things. Therefore, governments need to set particular limits on artistic ideas so that they will not harm social thinking. Artists also had better be aware that creative freedom is not freely writing what you like, drawing whatever you want, or creating artwork not for anyone, any community or ethnicity. For example, it is unacceptable for a painting promoting war, a song distorting history or a movie inciting young people to participate in social evils to come out without governmental regulation.
In conclusion, on condition that creative artistic ideas expressed through artwork are lawful and do not disobey moral standards, they have the ultimate and complete freedom to be brought out to the public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 692, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'artists'' or 'artist's'?
Suggestion: artists'; artist's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25068870523 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8914560209 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3493468021 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309854403972 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992465444402 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727125402949 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194636645627 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154921516211 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.