living alone
It is true that many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. lives.In my opinion, there are both benefits and drawbacks of living alone. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of living alone.
In the one hand, living alone have some benefit. Firstly, it make people more independent. For example, when people live alone, they will learn how to cooking, do housework or make money for pay cost of living. As a result, they are more adult than people who living with their family. Secondly, they will feel more free and can do everything they want because of this does not disturbing others. For example, they can sing, dance, play games everytime they want. Lastly, they can choose location of the rents house nearly their company or their school, so it very convenient to go work or go to school.
In the other hand, living alone have some disadvantages. Firstly, people who live alone may feel lonely. It very saddest when they face with difficult problems and no one help them. They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide. Secondly, the renting price or price of new house is very expensive, they may not enough money to pay for them.
In conclusion, the trend choosing to live alone nowadays have both benefit and drawback. But in my opinion, the advantages of living alone is more than drawback.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lives
...o live alone nowadays than in the past. lives.In my opinion, there are both benefits ...
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Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... alone nowadays than in the past. lives.In my opinion, there are both benefits and...
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ng alone have some benefit. Firstly, it make people more independent. For example, w...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'disturb'
Suggestion: disturb
...hing they want because of this does not disturbing others. For example, they can sing, dan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80165289256 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40518586868 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52479338843 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4364485729 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.3529411765 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2352941176 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357205007743 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161896664443 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166126466572 0.0667982634062 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29932395716 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111404826434 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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