Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports, but others think that people should have freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that dangerous sports should be banned by the government, while others believe that individuals should be free to do whatever sport they choose. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give an opinion.
On the one hand, sport activities are essential for people, as they provide a healthy life. In order to pursue these activities for a long time, sportsmen tend to choose their go-to sports, even if it is dangerous. Having said that, some individuals love challenges and want to explore new things as life only comes. Moreover, taking part in this kind of sport would help them reduce stress rapidly after hard days. Moreover, most hazardous sports are equipped with protective equipment like helmets or devices which ensures safety, hence participants do not need to worry about.
On the other hand, in some worst cases, some bad situations could happen. Therefore, dangerous sports may cause harm to players. As a result, this would lead to death. For example, some climbers want to reach the summit of Everest, which is one of the highest and the most dangerous in the world. However, in 2015, some were dead because of bad weather. It is claimed that the government should prohibit this unhealthy sport.
To conclude, although people should do what they love, I believe that each individual should choose sports that suit their abilities as all things in life could happen by chance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... reduce stress rapidly after hard days. Moreover, most hazardous sports are equipped wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96218487395 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42981053557 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0576855592 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3571428571 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373320144016 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106283912281 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868837626877 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227974433606 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861429180952 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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