Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that meeting each other for friendship is important rather than virtual. In my opinion, I partially concur with this issue certain respects which I will explicate in the ensuing paragraph.
First, Online friendships can communicate with each other wherever and whenever they want since we live in a cutting-edge era and many advanced technologies can be used to give information to others. We can see an example when individuals want to talk to their friends over a long distance by using their mobile phone as mediator. Moreover, individuals might have international friends on the internet without meeting each other before. This can be seen from online games, involving many individuals and making friends in order to play together. For instance, Discord, an online platform, provides room chat and voice chat to play with other gamers since 2015.
On the other hand, Meeting each other can give the best experience to know deeply, such as knowing the characteristics and behavior of friends on how they talk to us. Thus, this would help individuals to find great friends because these days, it is hard to find proper friends. In addition, This may lead individuals in friendships to easily solve problems. As human beings, solving problems without meeting face to face is more complex, influenced by emotion which we can not see the same as face to face. Seemingly, it would save the friendship by gathering and would lead to a long-lasting friendship.
Overall, it seems to me that meeting directly in friendship would bring more experiences to know more about friends and could solve the friendship problems easily in order to keep friendship in the long run. That is provided that we can find more friends on the internet by cutting-edge technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07849829352 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80089395208 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8561580758 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18786197888 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681584358478 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640715888844 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115978087726 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478270862197 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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