Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss.
There is a saying that, 'We work for living not our life for Work'. Yes, the above line highlights the essence of work life balance which is always needed nowadays in this high technological and competitive world.
To begin with, we always phase tight deadlines and more work to deliver within a speculated time.
But, this always result in unhealthy lifestyle, mental illness like depression and affects personal relationships between family members. In some of the cases, people don't have time for their ownselves and lag proper rest and rejuvenation which is essential. We can see more divorces rate in recent times where, a person does not have time with family and cores. Also, a number of life threatening illnesses are happening due to too much screen time work and more young people are affected with heart illness and cardiac arrest these days.
However, in most of the organizations, mindfulness & well being practices are being implemented, which helps their employees to balance work and life. It is high time to know about the value of life and work to maintain proper rhythm in life instead of spending much time in work.
In conclusion, once healthy and peaceful living is always a responsibility of an individual and proper planning and mindfulness activities like meditation, prayer and yoga is essential
for an individual to cope with pressures associated with work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11403508772 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74131485178 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587719298246 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5298853354 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368110691031 0.242375264174 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146216236127 0.0925447433944 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870711803483 0.071462118173 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155835781103 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107752860442 0.0609392437508 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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