Do you think students who go to university should pay full fee than who do not go to university given that graduates earn higher salaries. Agree or disagree
Recently, the salary of graduated and non-graduated students has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "should graduated students be paid more salary than non-graduate students?". Whereas it is a widely held view that graduated students should not receive more salary than non-graduate students, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the educational system standpoint, academic performance is bound up inextricably with academic certification, which indicates it lead to both professional career and average salary. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018, demonstrates the relationship between higher education level and paid employment as well as an exponential increase in job satisfication. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of company director is correlated positively with not only skilled worker but also business partner.
Within the realm of socioeconomic, without the slightest doubt, graduated students attribute to more experience, in that it would come down to more avenue, country's progress, and employee involvement. A salient example of such attribution is understatement employment, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take successful career for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint not having academic education problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to x, x, and even x. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of government, companies and private organization for providing facilities for them.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that graduated students should receive more salary than non-graduate students. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1207.87684729 149% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94719471947 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3125023056 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 139.433497537 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653465346535 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 379.143842365 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0125471023 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.615384615 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991939871664 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297017370034 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460081148933 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602007473923 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538310492087 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 12.6369458128 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.53 11.5310837438 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 55.0591133005 202% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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