How widely of you think the problems spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause?
Now in the modern era, time plays a vital role in human life and it is also very percious for human beigns. Many people spend too much time on work and not spend time with family or friends. I will shed light on these views with my opinion in upcoming paragraphs before proper conclusion.
Firstly, time is important for every one. Those who not care about time and waste time they donot achive success in life. Many, people go for jobs and they spend more time on job which is not good for thier family or personal life. And, then the problems where create for instance one person focus on work only donot bother about wife or children then big problem raise like thier child can do wrong things like drugs, drink alchol and go in bad society.
Secondly, also when thier parents cannot teach thier childerns in good way or not care about our childrens it affect on growth of child. Moreover, the life was very small and person do all things like enjoy life because it is very percious. Also, no one can no when they die so live life enjoyable.
All in all, i opine that, when anyone can do one work more and more it is bad for them. The personal life is also important like the work. But do all things things on time to time which is beneficial for all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35593220339 5.00649968141 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.9398081094 2.71678728327 71% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555084745763 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7258579221 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0769230769 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200393732149 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829963434181 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843672237893 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127731268508 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780134021557 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 12.6369458128 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 11.5310837438 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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