The space travel is excellent these day, but there are many environmental problems in our planet we should tackle the problems but not travel space and spend a lot of money. Discuss this opinion.
The importance of space travel, was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of environmental problems have sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on our planet in recent years. It can agreed that government should spend money on improving quality of life at earth than spending money on space travel. This essay will elaborate how much our living place need to improve and minimise pollution and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why money should be spend on pollution control but the most conspicuous one steams on the fact that people's quality of life and years of living are decreasing constantly. Green house effect us one of the biggest problem around the world. For instance, Australian's average life is about eighty years which is 20 years more than India.
On the contrary, some people adopted an opposing view and tend to believe that space research is necessary for future. Space visits will help to find many more spices, metals, soil, and antibiotics for human. For example, America found water on Mars in 1989 when they sent one of their team to mars for research. They also found some different types of spices which can live without having oxygen in atmosphere.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the importance of solving environmental problems is prominent, although, there are some drawback which shouldn't be over-looked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...d on our planet in recent years. It can agreed that government should spend money on i...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...re numerous reasons why money should be spend on pollution control but the most consp...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...although, there are some drawback which shouldnt be over-looked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, for example, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12757201646 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63680377919 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637860082305 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3369454067 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.833333333 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2446857047 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801217118935 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719308087386 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131436074728 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105082621414 0.0609392437508 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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