Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that difficult activities which are cumbersome provides more recreation than the one that are simple and easy. I assert that it is true that people find entertainment in doing adventurous task but it's rare or not always, more relaxation is there in things which are less tedious.
To begin with, in leisure time people always think to choose that task which gives them real pleasure like, its completely depends up to personal preference. Generally, masses like to do the things in which they are adept and can be done with ease. activities which gives peace to soul are more prefered. For example, many people choose singing as hobby, its not because one find it difficult, in fact it is their area of interest. Apart from this, after working long hours in offices, it will always better to spare the free time on the activities which soothes the soul and can be performed without any effort. Hence, many opt to enjoy the recreational time for relaxation and comfort.
Moreover, due to advancement in information technology, people keep on updating their social status. social networking sites are thriving like anything, due to which people posting the pictures of adventure they have done. it is a kind of show off, due to which many have to choose the same activity just to post the images online. In order words it's not their free wish they are forced to choose difficult activities because of peer pressure. However, thing cannot be same for all, their are people who like to explore the world in different way and always try to do some thing different and tedious, which is hard to accomplish. Once they successful in doing it, they develop the feeling of fulfilment. Therefore, opting of adventure due to social pressure will not make any sense, but can be enjoyed if person has keen interest in trying for variety.
In conclusion, it is a some what a myth that hobbies must be strenuous if we want to get real amusement. it is personal choice to choose the activity in which one is really comfortable
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: Activities
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to sing', 'to singe'.
Suggestion: to sing; to singe
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: Social
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Suggestion:
...us. social networking sites are thriving like anything, due to which people posti...
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Suggestion: It
...e pictures of adventure they have done. it is a kind of show off, due to which man...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
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Message: Did you mean 'somewhat' (=slightly)?
Suggestion: somewhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76704545455 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53548550089 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8705681341 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7058823529 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152927931085 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515386675437 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510408060949 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106239601303 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311825260397 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.