study at home
<p class="MsoNormal">In modern time, some people believe that children can be
educated at home instead of attending school. In my opinion, while this
tendency has some benefits, I would argue that there are far more drawbacks.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt">From an overall respective, the
education children at home seem to be accepted simply because some children
could receive good knowledge from their parents. To illustrates, nowadays,
parents achieve a high level of education with master degree or PhD degree.
Thus they would be able to provide their offspring useful lessons, skill, and
directions like what they learn from school.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt">In spite of the argument above, I
believe that this phenomenon is also negative for the following reasons. The
first argument is that parents could not offer some value abilities for
children like schools. Take an example, in my country, where schools provide
children opportunities in order to do group activities as well as presentation
in public which is important in the modern workplace. Therefore, studying at
home with parents would limit the development of children, and this become
disadvantaged compete for other students in the future. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt">Equally important is that this
trend would cause social problems for people in the long term. In evidence,
children study at home have less social relationships because of a lack of
chances to make friend and communication. Consequence, children would have less
social interaction, and this would lead them into social isolation.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-indent:36.0pt">In conclusion, although I
recognize the possible positive effects of this tendency, It seems to me that
it is a negative development overall.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...tion with master degree or PhD degree. Thus they would be able to provide their off...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.68539325843 5.12529762239 130% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.3144001459 2.80592935109 225% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.6784558387 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.5 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138775096518 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089270730232 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126331512484 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498022885524 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109519055864 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.82 12.4159519038 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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