Some parents believe that football is not good for their children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that children should not be allowed to play football by their parents. I completely disagree with this statement and believe that football creates a lot of problems both for children and parents.
Playing football can lead you to serious injuries. This is because football considered to be an active and dangerous game in which there are many players. For example sportsman can break leg or flex a muscle.
Also I want to mention that you need to train a lot to be a professional footballer. It means that you have to train everyday to be cool, but even this does not guarantee that you will play for the popular club. So you can play all your life and will not attain anything. For example I have a couple of friends who are playing football since they were around 6-7 years, and that still play not so good in the same club, but the most popular footballers already were in good teams when they were 17, but my friends still did not attain anything.
I strongly disagree with the idea that parents should allow their kids to play football. It is so dangerous game with a lot of disadvantages. And I think that it is a huge wasting of time. This is not justified in any way
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...sman can break leg or flex a muscle. Also I want to mention that you need to trai...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...baller. It means that you have to train everyday to be cool, but even this does not guar...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49771689498 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42870011866 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529680365297 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.7811590909 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7692307692 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284722500074 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884037270902 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760006880651 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167867946793 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867102901352 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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