Some people think that the best way to run a business with is within the family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a family run business.
Family business are quite popular in many countries. While some believe that they have a higher chance of being successful in their business by sharing it with their kinsmen, however, some other argue that this method will lead to some obstacles for upcoming generation. In my perspective joint venture has more merits than demerits which will be ascribed in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark on, the integrity and profound loyalty are the most prominent benefits of sharing a business with relatives. The family members will always stand with their business partner in any stage of life, whether ups or down come in the business. They will ever attempt to find the ways how to elaborate their business. In addition to this, kinsmen never blame their parents for any kind of loss or profit as they both may responsible for it. To corroborate, a well known brand, 'Nike' is ran by two kinsmen and they are successful in their business with joint efforts. Therefore, sharing business with kinsmen is more beneficial than sharing with third person.
Despite having this, there are some drawbacks of having joint venture. First of all, family business might generate some obstacles the partners like profit sharing, position and many other. Personages will fight for their leadership in business and sometimes they will be divided into two businessmen. For instance, a joint venture between the Hero group and Honda motor company was established in 1984. Unfortunately, due to some discriminations, both partners separate their business in 2010. Hence, family business can produce misunderstanding as well as discriminations among the partners.
To sum up, although there are some disagreement and disadvantages of joint venture, it is more durable as well as beneficial for the family members and upcoming generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'run'.
Suggestion: run
...orroborate, a well known brand, Nike is ran by two kinsmen and they are successful ...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...tners like profit sharing, position and many other. Personages will fight for their leader...
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Line 5, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed into two businessmen. For instance, a joint venture between the Hero group and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, third, well, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28275862069 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82544073356 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548275862069 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2156708694 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24287103751 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933705300733 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635733601655 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161578473485 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272080246304 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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