Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries What are the causes of this What solutions can be offered
For the past few decades, the rising of the fast food industry as well as the fast pace of the modern life have undeniably lead to an upsurge in the number of obese children. This is an unsolved problem which can exert a negative impact on the sustainable development of a country. My following essay will clarify the reasons and suggest some proactive solutions to address this issue.
To commence with, there are both objective and subjective causes resulting in this situation. Initially, there is no denying that parents are not well prepared enough in taking care of their children. Many people are ignorant of the negative consequences of fast foods or don’t mind researching carefully before buying or even still purchase when acknowledging their bad effects, which induces them to consume these types of food unrelentlessly. In addition to that, parents are sometimes too indulgent towards their kids, allowing them to eat whatever they want. Furthermore, in terms of subjective causes, the mass media and marketing campaign of fast food companies have succeeded in enticing them into buying their products repeatedly without health warnings. Secondly the fast pace of modern life has undoubtedly reduced parents into the state of not having enough time for a nutritional meal with their kids.
Childhood obesity is highly likely to result in many serious health problems, therefore, it is critical to take drastic measures in order to solve this as soon as possible. First and foremost, the most efficacious method is to concentrate on education. Children must be comprehensively educated on how to protect and maintain their wellbeing by means of not only school curriculum but mass media, etc. Once they are instilled in the importance of a healthy life and negative effects of fast food, it is likely that they will actively consume healthy food and beverages. Moreover, the government also needs to implement more strict regulations applied to the fast food industry. A limit on harmful ingredients contained in sweets, crisps, etc plays a key role in addressing a national health problem. Besides, putting a control on the number as well as content of fast food advertising on TV, social media, … will lead to a significant decrease in coverage of fast food around the country.
To conclude, childhood obesity has been a must-solved problem which is caused by both objective and subjective reasons, and needs to be tackled drastically by not only the government but also the whole society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
...pace of the modern life have undeniably lead to an upsurge in the number of obese ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1466992665 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81484042498 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562347188264 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0778639932 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.823529412 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0588235294 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124981908496 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041660383654 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544926151349 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934344683235 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044528953935 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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