In many countries fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages

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In many countries, fast-food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

In many parts of world, the availability of fast food is becoming low priced and immense. I believed that disadvantages eclipsed by its advantages due to its effect on health and more calories intake.

To commence with, fast food have disadvantages and advantages too. Advantages of fast food are that, these are easily available and very affordable. The easy finding of fast food and cheap price attracts people towards it. For example, McDonald's has increased their income by offering new and affordable deals on food. Hence by knowing about precious deals, customers are readily consume this food just because of discount.

Secondly, the fast food has more disadvantages it is very effective on our health. To explicate it, the consumption of fast food leads to the cardiovascular diseases, cholesterol,acidity. For instance, famous researches shows that the rate of cardiovascular diseases has been increased by 55% due to the intake of fast food. Thus, the fast food is too dangerous for our health and our digestive system.

Furthermore, the intake of junk food means the intake of more calories. To elaborate it, this oily food is deep fried which contains more calories, fats and trans-fat. To epitome, the oily food has less nutrients but more calories whereas,the healthy food has more energy, minerals but less calories. As a result, more consumption of calories causes weight gain if you are eating these type of a food products on daily basis.

In conclusion, it is severaly drastic to consume the fast food because of health issues and weight gain.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'calories'' or 'calorie's', 'calory's'?
Suggestion: calories'; calorie's; calory's
...es due to its effect on health and more calories intake. To commence with, fast food ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ering new and affordable deals on food. Hence by knowing about precious deals, custom...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
...t precious deals, customers are readily consume this food just because of discount. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...discount. Secondly, the fast food has more disadvantages it is very effective ...
^^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , acidity
...the cardiovascular diseases, cholesterol,acidity. For instance, famous researches shows ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun nutrients is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...rans-fat. To epitome, the oily food has less nutrients but more calories whereas,the...
^^^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...less nutrients but more calories whereas,the healthy food has more energy, minerals ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer calories'?
Suggestion: fewer calories
...lthy food has more energy, minerals but less calories. As a result, more consumption of calor...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun calories is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...lthy food has more energy, minerals but less calories. As a result, more consumption...
^^^^
Line 7, column 387, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'type of'.
Suggestion: type of
...ses weight gain if you are eating these type of a food products on daily basis. In con...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15234375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92813239977 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54296875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8026440627 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342896351005 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127492179432 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673211956413 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197306578995 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694958409279 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'calories'' or 'calorie's', 'calory's'?
Suggestion: calories'; calorie's; calory's
...es due to its effect on health and more calories intake. To commence with, fast food ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ering new and affordable deals on food. Hence by knowing about precious deals, custom...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consumed'.
Suggestion: consumed
...t precious deals, customers are readily consume this food just because of discount. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...discount. Secondly, the fast food has more disadvantages it is very effective ...
^^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , acidity
...the cardiovascular diseases, cholesterol,acidity. For instance, famous researches shows ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun nutrients is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...rans-fat. To epitome, the oily food has less nutrients but more calories whereas,the...
^^^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...less nutrients but more calories whereas,the healthy food has more energy, minerals ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer calories'?
Suggestion: fewer calories
...lthy food has more energy, minerals but less calories. As a result, more consumption of calor...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun calories is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...lthy food has more energy, minerals but less calories. As a result, more consumption...
^^^^
Line 7, column 387, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'type of'.
Suggestion: type of
...ses weight gain if you are eating these type of a food products on daily basis. In con...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15234375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92813239977 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54296875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8026440627 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342896351005 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127492179432 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673211956413 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197306578995 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694958409279 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.