Some high schools have a requirement that students must complete a certain amount of volunteer work in order to graduate. What do you think about this type of requirement? Give details to support your opinion
Doing unpaid work has extraordinary benefits for individuals. Many educational institutions make it compulsory to work voluntarily as a part of their studies in an effort to complete the programme. In my opinion internship programs arranged by universities comprise of huge advantages for students. I am going to cover these benefits and examples in this essay to support my point of view.
Admittedly, if learners would pursue courses that include voluntary work, they would be able to get valuable experience related to their field of study. Moreover, Most of the colleges allow students to have real experience of working environment relevant to their study course that provides job opportunities on the basis of their performance at work. Therefore, learning practical skills assist them in their career in the future period of time. However, studying merely theoretical subjects can not develop skills and abilities to handle all the activities when someone go in real working context first time. Secondly, In voluntary work commitment students focus their attention on acquiring knowledge and developing skills instead of earning large amount of money out of profession. So, it will let them be expert in problem solving and communication skills that are backbone of a company. For example, Four months co-op programme is organized for giving learners a chance to be in a company as a trainee and if they have benchmark performance, company can offer them permanent job.
In addition to this, In these days students tend to go in overseas countries for their tertiary education in order to hold a lucrative profession. Hence, For immigration purposes graduates are required to take experience of office jobs and internships helps graduates to be placed in reputed and major companies. Apart from this, Freshers can save their precious time finding a job after completion of degree and can be hired directly in respective organization.
To conclude, Although students do not get paid in voluntary work, i strongly believe that they are able to brighten their future by getting experience because majority of companies employ on basis of skills that are most demanding in this competitive era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30571428571 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93803349476 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602857142857 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4517629538 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.8 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146651561701 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485860731679 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288671291865 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913125561295 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177523591139 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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