Many people believe that living a city life offers greater benefits as compared to the
countryside? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by overwhelming of majority that the city provides more benefits than the village to live in. Despite the village has high-level of nature quality, I strongly believe that city gives the pivotal facilities which can not find in the village easily, and it will support the quality of human live.
On the one hand, village is identical with nature preservation. In addition, live in the village, we are supplied by good air quality since there is no industries and transportation activities. To illustrate, the plethora of village in Indonesia is filled by farmer which no require to do their work by activities which emerge pollution. As a result, the quality of nature is still safe for human.
On the other hand, the city is completed by paramount facilities. First and foremost, the health care and educational facilities as two aspects which have ability to support the quality as human. For instance, in Jakarta as capital city of Indonesia is provided by numerous health care such as hospitals, clinics, personal health care, as well as kind of courses from elementary school until the university levels. Consequences, this achievable facilities will encourage people have good health and education quality. Secondly, the other additional facilities are more founded in the city. For example, the modern market to serve groceries, sport center to maintain health life, and shopping center to maintain the entertainment.
To conclude, although still maintain their nature, the city is more able to fulfill human necessitates based on the facilities which can find easily and completely. All the more, i reveal that the city is better to life with many facilities which can utilized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no industries'?
Suggestion: there are no industries
... are supplied by good air quality since there is no industries and transportation activities. To illus...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...ia is filled by farmer which no require to do their work by activities which emerge p...
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Line 7, column 180, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nd easily and completely. All the more, i reveal that the city is better to life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, of course, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19202898551 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83540594715 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539855072464 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2051843262 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.357142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112769476899 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400849793887 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399729212305 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072994147647 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359267427861 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.