More and more business meetings and business training have taken place on the internet. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people argue that theseday business meetings or business training are more and more organized on the online basis. Although there can be no doubt that internet can be beneficial to society to a certain extent, I hold a belief that this phenomenon will do more harm than good.
On the one hand, organizing business meetings or training is advantageous to some extent. Firstly, it is more convenient than normal way. This could be explained by the fact that people do not need to spend hours to prepare the meeting room and projectors or just to print the documents. Secondly, through the Internet, organizations can connect to others in the cheapest way, especially the companies which have import and export activities. For example, foreign partners can investigate more on cooperation projects rather than on the expensive moving expense between countries.
On the other hand, this trend can highlight a number of valid concerns. The first drawback is the lackage of direct interactions, which only face-to-face meetings have. This can easily lead to the misunderstanding when people meet together in the first time, so that this can affect to the cooperation decisions if members in the meetings do not believe in others. Another disadvantage is the risk of information theft. For instance, there were many hackers tried to break into online trainings of corporations in order to steal data and business secrets.
In conclusion, this trend might possess many benefits. However, I am more inclined to the view that the disadvantages will likely prevail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the disadvantages will likely prevail.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20948616601 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88171840361 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604743083004 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5167361328 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36641046366 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113832872347 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873941418807 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220655932937 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075821373368 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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