Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Recently, the use of complementary forms of medicine has become popular. However, there is a belief that such modalities are not effective, and even worse, they might cause detrimental side effect. I personally agree with this statement and will discuss my reasons in the following.
To begin with, the numerous numbers of alternative approaches has not been scientifically approved. In another word, no scientific research has been documented the value of efficiency and effectiveness of those methods in treatment of diseases. To give you an example, currently, a Chinese approach called acupuncture has been introduced in treating various illnesses such as cancer, blood pressure and obesity. Although this traditional modality has been applied from many years ago in China, the exact mechanism of this way and its value in healing patients has not been academically approved.
Moreover, the devastating effect of some alternative medication has become a concern for practitioners. To illustrate this vividly, research studies showed some herbal remedies might contain a percentage of poisonous ingredient which might harm for the health. They believe the prescription of those in a high dosage can increase the risk of poisonous and even worse can cause the disfunction of many organs such as liver and kidney in the body. For instance, Zaffran which is a fragrant and common spicy in food recipes, can lead to fetus abortion whether pregnant woman consumed the high amount of this plant.
To conclude, although some traditional and supplementary approaches have been devised for treating illnesses, no approve has been taken by any validate medical organization. Therefore, it is highly recommended that individuals follow modern approved medications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53333333333 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.045030132 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9644049367 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.923076923 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103439282737 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041098709368 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414109962925 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065230268547 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583013269507 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.