It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
"Only those who dare to fail greatly can ever achieve greatly," said Robert Kennedy, and many people shared this opinion about taking risks. From my perspective, I also approve of the idea that the importance of risk-taking makes it more beneficial, instead of disadvantageous, to career and personal life.
Some people dare not to accept risks in their jobs and personal lives as they can lead to detrimental outcomes, especially if embraced indiscriminately. Health and property may be the first factors to be adversely affected by this recklessness. In the sports world, there have been many athletes who took reckless risks and then unintentionally caused injuries ending their careers. In the marketplace, if traders did not rush into temporary and unstable profits, bankruptcies causing thousands and even millions of dollars in losses would not have happened. More importantly, morale can also be negatively impacted by taking risks. Failures caused by the recklessness can be too mentally painful to make people lose confidence and bravery, leading to several serious mental illnesses.
However, in my opinion, many people embrace risks selectively, which results in more significant advantages than the drawbacks mentioned. A benefit needing mentioning is that it can be a stepping stone to a career leap. Under no circumstances will man accomplish success in short progress if he does not make at least a risky decision. Self-made businessmen and businesswomen are great examples of this since their reputation might not be widely known if they did not take risks to earn their living at first. Furthermore, failure resulting from risk-taking, as mentioned, can hurt the confidence of a person, particularly a youngster, but it appears to be a worthwhile lesson for one's own. It can be about reducing impulsiveness and narrow-mindedness while making decisions or having an effective plan to set up a business and build a good self-image. This point would prove that doing something that can even be risky appears to be much better than having nothing done.
In conclusion, although risks can be adverse to career and personal lives, taking them wisely instead of blindly would yield more significant advantages than disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...to fail greatly can ever achieve greatly,' said Robert Kennedy, and many people s...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks earning'.
Suggestion: risks earning
...ot be widely known if they did not take risks to earn their living at first. Furthermore, fai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, while, at least, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36723163842 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15984917565 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618644067797 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.434637728 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238860599677 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784799634989 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796290235997 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155838853654 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00893202997315 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.