Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Recently people are much more interested in arranging an excursion to places which are difficult to visit. Although there can be found some downsides related to this topic, the advantages of these type of trips cannot be neglected.
On the plus side, the merits for the travelers to inhospitable environment are manifold and noticeable. To begin with, one can enjoy an unforgettable and once in a lifetime experience when visiting these intact areas. To put it another way, these places are among the ,most special and rarest spots the whole world over. One cannot simply refuse to take the chance of visiting these beauty spots as these opportunities are not to be always available to them. The good illustration of this is Sahara desert. The greatness of the desert is beyond one's imagination that they eagerly try too engage themselves in the highly risk visit to Sahara desert. People, furthermore, view the opportunity as a moment to be able to separate themselves from the routine lifestyle and repeated daily actions they got stuck with day in, day out.
However, the downsides regarding the matter are not negligible. First and foremost, it should be considered that the safety is not probably to the utmost. That is to say, tourist can find themselves in difficult circumstances which one possibly confronts with endangering their own life. Take tours of Everest mountain especially designed for rookie climbers as example. Although the trainees of tour agency are bound to prepare tourists for climbing Everest, they cannot guarantee travelers' health and security completely since some factors such as the weather condition is out of their control. Moreover, the expenses of visiting such hostile environments are not considered to be the modest outlay, therefore visitors should decide wisely whether they are capable of spending so much money or not.
To sum up, visiting highly dangerous areas can have both positive and negative features. Whilst they can bring about uniqueness and getting rid of repeatedness of one's life, their safety may be put in jeopardy and also the amount of money that should be spent is notable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, such as, to begin with, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14613180516 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70658849852 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593123209169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.574236289 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.647058824 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194162163686 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567944531548 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568234500949 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106076519011 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449770175675 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.