Do the advantages of these developments outweigh the disadvantages? Discuss.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of a plan for the development of the country. There is widespread worry that this will only lead to the myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and should be rejected.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance but the most preponderant one is that development phases always brings positive change and helps people for better life. In fact, not only development is necessary to bring changes but also development create systematic plans and policies. We can find overwhelming evidence to support that positive changes bring development and development makes people's life easier. Needless to say, the merits of the arguments stand people as far as development is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this arguments is that advantage of development are heavier than other factors which lead to uplift the living standard of the people. Besides, it makes a better life and provides all the basic facilities to the public such as education, occupation, health and other factors. Hence, it is apparent why people are in favour of developments.
In view of this arguments, one can conclude that benefits of developments are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08571428571 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89771197566 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8484321475 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131763883743 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498979468931 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428335469382 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713075586042 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032751044119 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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