In many schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (eg. languages) and boys choose science subjects (eg. Physics). What do you think are the reasons? Do you think that this tendency should be changed?
Recently,it is more common to witness the high divergence of students,opting for subjects at the educational instution .While female have the tendency towards some art subjects ,male,however ,are opposed to,decide to learn science subjects instead.It is worthwhile in this article to investigate the main cause and consult whether this trend should be altered.
It is well-known that,with the entrenched prejudice of the society about sexual discrimination ,especially in terms of cognitive and biological competence,people from two different sexes have been unconcioiusly effected.Over the centuries,it is widely acknowledged that female were born,inheriting the dexterious and extrodinary temperament and mesmorisation ,which certainly stand them in good stead if they enrolled in these subjects such as: literature,history,languages and so forth .Meanwhile ,male,on contrary to female,are believed to excel at difficult anf logical subjects ,requring analytical,problem-solving and intellectual capability.These public concepts are progressively becoming the priciple by which,youngster made the decision for their favourable subjects and specific direction of career.At this magtitude,it become surprisingly accomprehensible that science and art are prefered respectively with the innocent dream that these options would assist them to evolve in the future
In the light of the diversity in subject's preference between two sexes,it shows that this unpreconceived notion must be converted immediately before actually getting saturated in people's mindset.We may point out an indisputable fact that ,male and female,these days are completely at liberty,being capable to learn whatever thay fell favourable or have innate aptitude and effectionate passion with,irrespective of some existed tradditional misconception.It should be born in mind that ,girls,also are able to have an intellectual ability to work and make the immense contribution in the domain of science while some boys,also obtain natural advantages in the area of art work,which allow them to devote and exert desperately ,being productive to the developent of the society.The evidences from the begone time centuries such as:Leonardo vinci is a men but he was unquestionably pre-eminent artist or Tereshkova was the first female astronaut in the world flying into universe in the space shuttle.These,demonstrate that there is no visible nor visual boundary in term of sex's competence,it is simpe just the way human beings evaluate their ability.Alternatively,people must be entitled to participate in their favourate classes or courses to cultivate the skills.In no uncertain terms,if violence was uterlized to enforce students to study in unwanted class,as opposed to their nature,they would likely argue and work less efficiently,which lead to de insidious detriotation on their future.
From what has been discussed above ,we draw the conclusion that,Joint endeavour to eradicate the irreversable sexual stereotype must be taken by the whole socity ,as a measure to create a new world where everyboby are unabled to be autonomous and supported in deciding their favourable subjects coupled with there pursuit of career
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2734.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96943231441 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.93371016063 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 176.041082164 166% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637554585153 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 880.2 506.74238477 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 152.0 20.2975951904 749% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 1016.65278679 49.4020404114 2058% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 911.333333333 106.682146367 854% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 152.666666667 20.7667163134 735% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.3333333333 7.06120827912 330% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 68.0 5.01903807615 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127695487601 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103133692087 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405467726998 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902273667798 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404096540305 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 83.0 13.0946893788 634% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -108.18 50.2224549098 -215% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 28.7 7.44779559118 385% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 66.1 11.3001002004 585% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.53 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.11 8.58950901804 199% => OK
difficult_words: 172.0 78.4519038076 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 9.78957915832 342% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 62.8 10.1190380762 621% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.7795591182 584% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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