Road rules are generally enforced by fining people for infringements. Some people, however, believe that governments should not penalize unsafe drivers but reward safe drivers instead.
Which view do you support?
In my opinion, road rules are imposed for people safety to protect them from accidents and injuries.Protection is a reward in itself. The importance of fines for violation of rules was always debatble, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of penalities imposed by government for unsafe driving, has sparked the controversy over the pottential influence of this trend in recent years.It can be aggreed that fines may have the bad impact on the people lifes. However, not penalizing unsafe drivers and rewarding the safe ones cannot protect the people from raod accidents which can cost general public life. I would support the view of penalities for disobeying the rules.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons to prove why fines are important for breaking rules. But, the most alarming one lies in the fact that fines helps to maintain the discipline and prevent the road incidents. For example america survey of 2018 showed the increase in fines lead to deduction of road incidents which was lower as compared to previous years. Therefore, infringement fines is a way to provide justice for people who suffer loss because of this mishappenings.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that fines are way's of snatching money out of public pocket. which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of rules and obligation over the people.
According to above facts I would prefer the first view of fines for violation of laws, which is prominent, although it has a number of drawbacks that should be well handled by public awaerness about traffic rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79815300489 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4225469751 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367143470828 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119777407332 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581902526532 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187489579973 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843472789202 0.0609392437508 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.