Roles of governments, companies and individuals to combat climate change.
Post industrial revolution, we has seen dramatic changes in the world climate. It's high time that we realize that humans are responsible for this change and every organization, government and individual should prioritize fighting climate change over everything else. This essay will discuss the roles and responsibilities of government, companies and individual to fight climate change.
Firstly, there are more than enough people on this planet who doesn't believe that climate change is real and how severe it can be in the near future. Governments can play an important role here as they have the resource to spread awareness of this situation which will give us a better chance to gradually stop this change. They should pass new laws which can be enforced on the companies responsible for poor waste management system. For example, many companies dump their toxic waste directly in local water bodies which not only makes it poisonous but also kills all the species inside it. This example clearly illustrates that new laws and awareness can help us win this war.
Even though companies are one of the main culprits in this, but individuals are not far behind. Everyday millions of vehicles are pumping carbon dioxide in our environment which has skyrocketed the air pollution and as a result, some of the cities are on high alert for air pollution but it can be fixed. For instance, Delhi government passed a law to drive odd/even number vehicles on a single day which drastically reduced the pollution. Therefore, if people want they can be an important part of this solution just by using less resources.
This essay argued that it's everyone's responsibility to fight climate change because if we don't do it now then eventually it will become permanent. In my opinion people can play a key role as government and companies are made by people and they have the power to put a stop on climate change once and for all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
Post industrial revolution, we has seen dramatic changes in the world clim...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...e than enough people on this planet who doesnt believe that climate change is real and...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...eted the air pollution and as a result, some of the cities are on high alert for air pollut...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y to fight climate change because if we dont do it now then eventually it will becom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 324.0 242.827586207 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96604938272 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69605964626 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577160493827 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9463235293 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.928571429 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174989110348 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725844507918 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984846520313 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123397984858 0.151781067708 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652103633353 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.