Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
technology has raised this world into whole different level. The technological growth from past twenty years has made human life simple. Today, technological aspects are used in everywhere. this means that the generation in 21th century may not imagine the life without technology. communication became very easy as social media, text messaging, voice calling has been introduced to us. so the introduction of technology is better way for communication rather than outdated paper media.
When it comes to communication, one person can easily communicate with other person while roaming anywhere in the world. technology bought people more closer. If any incident occurs, then it spreads like radioactive element with the help of internet. social medias serves as primary role. this wasn't possible in 19th century. peoples used to contact one another with the help of letters which takes a lot of time to reach amongst them. The real time conversation is possible by using social networks.
it is also true that with increased use of technology, the face to face human interaction has been reduced. social media bought people closer in virtual way, but the real human interaction has been reduced. it has been studied that over use of technological applications has very serious negative effect on human health. so while using this opportunities, one should not forget live in real world.
it can be concluded that every human being lives in different aspects of life. The people who born in 90's would believe that increased use of technology reduces opportunities of human interaction since they lived more in the period of paper media, and young generation born in 21th century would mostly believe that technology provides with new and better ways to communicate with one another.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 287.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2543554007 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77135594031 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581881533101 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.3005395223 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3684210526 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84210526316 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375727697912 0.243740707755 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952324714935 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947802118195 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227153694287 0.150359130593 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868727526388 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.