Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
Inspire of ever-increasing role of internet in online media channel, some people think that newspaper still keeps the most vital position. In my opinion, I disagree with this point of view.
Firstly, internet with easy accessibility can help reader get the news promptly by some clicks. People only need 1 portable device such as cell phone or laptop, they can search all related information they want because a huge storage of news is available in websites for them to explore. They don’t need to go to the newsstands to buy newspaper one by one or wait postman brings to them. You can imagine the situation if you need to look for something and you do it manually by collecting newspaper in many days. It will take time a lot.
Secondly, meanwhile newspaper only can provide information for readers with articles and some picture for reference, internet with non-stop progress of technology industry has unfolded the possibility to upload videos and voice records on various online websites. These lively modes and vivid approaches attract people to reading news on the online sources. Besides, the reader also can know opinions, ideas from others readers at the same time via their comments. Therefore, they can have an objective, multi-directional overview of the news. From my point of view, with this benefit internet can take over the position of printed newspaper.
Thirdly, we should consider about the cost of buying newspaper and space to store them. Nowadays, internet appears in every corner of society and many public places set up free wi-fi with very fast speed such as airport, station,…People can explore information and don’t need to pay more for buying newspaper then they also don’t need to arrange the space to keep it. Obviously, internet is more convenient than traditional way to get the news.
In the final analysis, I believe that newspaper would not be the most crucial source of information continuously because internet will draw readers by its preeminent advantages.
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- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problem as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
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Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
...ry fast speed such as airport, station,…People can explore information and don’t need ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, third, thirdly, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12158054711 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78162502049 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598784194529 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5214670084 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283400002592 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08738995491 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561100906706 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151322249969 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268303869664 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.