In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, with the climate changes and its consequences, people tend to think of finding other planets to live rather than the earth; thus, more money should be spent on astronaut field as they think. However, in my opinion, I disagree with this point of view for several reasons.
first, using more money on reasearch on other planets is impractical. As can be seen obviously, the infrastructure and facilities are good enough to do space investment. people now have International space Station between USA and Russia which shows that there have been a huge amount of money paid for this scientific area to continue the path of seeking for a livable planets. In contrast, the result to find out a new one to live in is still ambiguous. Scientists haven't given any confirmation whether people are able to spread their livelihood in any planets on this galaxy for a long period of time.
Second, it is more important for the governments to spend public money on projects improving the quality of environment and people lives on earth. The nature has been damaged at an ever-increased level, which leads to harsh climate and the extinction of species in this planet. Hence, people should take actions to protect the earth first since they cannot find other suitable places to reside in right now. Furthermore, the increase of global warming is the consequence of the lack of public awareness of global citizens. people prefer having more profits for themselves and their companies to the benefits of the environment and dare destroying the eco-system just to be provided with money. because of these problems, it is vital to fund more on education in order to provide wider knowledge on environment and build awareness for children, the future citizens.
In conclusion, it is now not necessary to fund more on space research because there are more remain factors need to be cared in case of protecting and preserving the life on earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, still, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94171779141 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73305309294 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9431450854 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345374464975 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110191928673 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847365326535 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221015603401 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705997656044 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.