People are living longer after they retire. What are the problems? What can be done to solve the problems?
People's life expectancy is increasing after their retirement. Although this tendency may result in some issues, several solutions can be applied to tackle the problems.
Extended life span may cause some problems to individuals and society as a whole. On a societal level, retirees living longer may overwhelm state healthcare systems. In fact, the elderly who seem to have vulnerable immune systems or diagnosed conditions, such as cardiovascular disease, type-2 diabetes tend to demand significant amounts of medical service and treatment. In addition, aged people are likely to experience losses of mobility, which will require a number of nursing staff to take care of them. Furthermore, such people seem to lose their working ability, which may leave the weight of tax payment to the young. On an individual front, the elderly are likely to receive low pension rates, which will not be able to guarantee them good life's conditions in the long run. In my country, people after retiring are only eligible for 70% of their basic salary that will leave them little affordability to cover their lives. Therefore, the extended life span can burden state medical systems, young taxpayers and pensioners themselves.
However, governments can adopt some policies to address the issues. Firstly, national and regional authorities can re-allocate their budget and raise funding to strengthen the capacity of the health service systems. At the time, more nurses should be incentivized or encouraged voluntarily to take care of the elderly. Secondly, governments can improve pension schemes, which can furnish pensioners with more money to cover their needs. Furthermore, more employment opportunities suited for retirees should be created to help increase their earnings, such as gardening, babysitting, and other lightwork. Thus, some measures can be implemented to reduce burdens on healthcare schemes and improve the elderly's lives.
In conclusion, retirees live longer may give rise to some social problems and pressure themselves. However, governmental programs can play a crucial role in tackling the issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[5]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun nursing seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much nursing', 'a good deal of nursing'.
Suggestion: much nursing; a good deal of nursing
... losses of mobility, which will require a number of nursing staff to take care of them. Furthermore...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54012345679 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84962468483 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601851851852 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7294496166 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177786999273 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559754527489 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359141856268 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118691049008 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216875468073 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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