Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people argue that migrants to urban areas can settle down at ease. Others, however, believe that the living conditions in city life have become increasingly unfavorable. Both sides of the issue will be shed light on, prior to championing the latter viewpoint.
To begin with, the increasing simplicity of urban life is due to the fact that metropolises offer the best healthcare in the face of exacerbating environmental conditions. Specifically, car emissions and littering contaminate the air and the water supply, which leads to the outbreak of many respiratory problems such as lung cancer, for which scientists have yet to find a remedy. However, the cities are home to many advanced hospitals and pharmacies staffed with top-tier professional medical practitioners, not to mention the most up-to-date medical facilities. As these resources are made available to the public at any time, residents living in urban areas face a substantially lessened risk of chronic diseases.
Nevertheless, it is safe to say that such advantages are to a certain degree eclipsed by the bustling lifestyle in the city, which undoubtedly results in the growing difficulty in residing here. Particularly, the majority of the labor force work not only during office hours but also after they go home, forcing them on a path of a sedentary lifestyle. To make matters worse, the heavy workload that these individuals are subject to is often associated with hazardous habits, such as regular consumption of fast food and a severe shortage of bonding time with friends and families.
In conclusion, we can arrive at the verdict that city life is indeed more challenging due to the demanding workload, in spite of the advancement in the medical system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22142857143 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01282124208 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646428571429 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8202557449 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.909090909 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0910602916288 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364390457697 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553410256345 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06359207548 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068397531826 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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