Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives.
In what ways can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?
In recent years, the developments in science and medicine that contain an opportunity for residents, especially the underprivileged, to facilitate the healthcare services that lead to the improvement of old individuals in the societies, who are close retirement living longer. From my perspective, there are immense benefits that older people contain to societies.
Firstly, the elders are known as the experienced and knowledgeable workforce that is a perennial experience in the myriad discipline in the workplace and daily lives. Those skill cultivation play an integral role in the daily routine of relative peoples that be key of society. The evidence for this is provided by the job of the old individuals such as teachers, professors, and scientists as well as they have cultivated relevant job skills in their entire life and their technical expertise that can be replaced easily by the young workforce. Moreover, it is foremost to impart knowledge to the younger to enrich life experiences since they were in an entry job.
In addition, there is no doubt that the valuable and crucial of old people information, especially when they are the proponents of families. As longer they live the wiser they are, the elders are not only outsmarted to the new generation. Nevertheless, they can be a great reliable person that gives a hand to difficult issues. Notwithstanding, besides the role of a trusted workforce, they are playing a vital position in the economy that the elders also drive economic productivity and boost-socio economic development.
To sum up, there is undeniable that the longer life spans provide an abundance of benefits in both sides of family and society, which give an opportunity to keep continuing to support and be a great adviser in order to optimize the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 168, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this skill' or 'Those skills'?
Suggestion: This skill; Those skills
...line in the workplace and daily lives. Those skill cultivation play an integral role in th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dviser in order to optimize the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19243986254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09235201266 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1821818172 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.363636364 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171273432646 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635082961124 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05496642948 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977512724528 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359368759437 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.