Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be released. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It has been debated whether clash movie productions should be banned or restricted by national authorities in recent years. While the tendency of prohibiting violent scenes on television and theater could have some merits, I strongly believe that adjusting the level of cruelty of those films could bring far more advantages for both the viewer and the film production.
There is no doubt that there are many reasons why the government should issue a ban on violent movies, one of which is the detrimental effect on their watchers, particularly innocent children. In fact, many viewers without an obvious understanding of the difference between the blood images of films and reality are more likely to imitate the film’s characters tending to use cruelty to solve everything rather than kindness and courtesy. The extremely excessive role-playing phenomenon is able to result in increasing domestic, school violence, creating more challenges to maintain social order and safety.
However, I realize that governing the movie production’s degree of violence could bring many potential benefits, one of which is that the style of the film is able to fulfill viewers’ demands. Apparently, people have the right to choose what they prefer to watch, including the clash movies. In addition, no one or any official state can strictly force their citizens to watch dull movies instead of those making them satisfied. Thus, the government should give some measures to control or limit the level of violence used in the films rather than inhibit them.
Another critical reason is that the filmmakers’ creativity could be restricted because of banning the film’s brutality by the local authorities. It should be noted that art, including its own pain and violence, cannot be prohibidden. Moreover, the crew members are aware enough about what they are intentionally doing and what they could face with criminal charges if their movies seriously influence moral education towards the community. Without any doubt, banning violent movies hardly makes as much sense as taking measures to decline their violence before being released.
In conclusion, I completely agree that monitoring violent scenes of films in terms of satisfying watchers’ tastes and increasing the creativity of the film productors overshadowns forbidding violent films such as declining the violent phenomena in society.
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Message: Did you mean 'maintaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: maintaining
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2024.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44086021505 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80851590541 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594086021505 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4785862161 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.571428571 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266070471885 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877875374333 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726910808185 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150731205652 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427588950744 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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