Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
In this time and age, people are more visiting place of interest where have difficult circumstance such as the Sahara desert and the Antarctic. This essay will elucidate both merits and demerits of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, this kind of difficult conditions of the tourist place will give a new experience and become the authentic aspect. In addition, one of the main purpose of tourism activities are finding different experience that can be the uniqueness of the place. To illustrate, in the Sahara desert, the tourist will feel difficult access and hot weather which give a different experience instead of other places. Moreover, this difficult circumstance will become an authentic aspect which only find in this place such as the cold atmosphere only provide in the Antarctic.
On the other hand, the extra-time as well as the vulnerable of dangerous impact when visit the tourism site with difficult conditions should be considered. In detail, to go to tourism site which have difficult conditions, the tourist need more time and distinguish access and it will emerge feel of overwhelm. Moreover, the extreme condition will create a potential dangerous because of the difference condition from the tourist. For example, when visit the Sahara desert or the Antarctic, the tourist faces the extra time during the trip and difference condition such as the extreme temperature which will emerge health disorder.
To sum up, this phenomenon not only brings the positive impact such as render unique experience and become the icon of the tourism place, but also threaten the condition of the tourist itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20610687023 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71078365023 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477099236641 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3796097507 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330744904154 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138605695645 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934923342358 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209452698638 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382060489743 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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