Violence in the media promotes violence in the society.
To what extent do you agree?
It is often argued that society is greatly influenced by ferocity shown in media. I strongly agree with this opinion and feels that young minds are prone to negative acts represented in the television.
First of all, it is often seen that youngsters spends more than 5- 6 hours watching television such as movies and cartoons. Although movies are great source of entertainment, violent scene creates negative impact on young minds. As a result, these young ones are not only exposed to brutality but also they try doing the same at very young age. For instance, a sixth class student of very reputed school in Mumbai murdered his junior because, the later refused to give him the seat in the bus. Thus, it has been observed that broadcasting ferocity forces people to perform the negative acts.
Secondly, I believe when the young generation get impacted negatively by media, they sometimes end up getting in terror activities. It has been noticed that many terror group uses media as the best source to create hatred among different religion. There are plethora of people who believes in creating differences between religions ending in hatred among each other. For example, there is a well know scholar in the name of Dr. Zakir Naik whose channel is specially broadcasted in order to promote his religious belief and ignoring other religion and this has most of the time created violence among religions. Therefore, it is important to understand that beside serials there are certain activities which should be prohibited on media.
To recapitulate, I would say in order to reduce severity among people, media should not expose young children to cruelty at very early stage. Young brain is designed in a manner it learn whenever it get any kind of information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 182, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learns'?
Suggestion: learns
... Young brain is designed in a manner it learn whenever it get any kind of information...
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Line 8, column 200, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...signed in a manner it learn whenever it get any kind of information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02033898305 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59573379909 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650847457627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6021058898 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10825569218 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316916514777 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352087160078 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609711198103 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394423838194 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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