Some people prefer to play team sports, while other prefer to play individual sports. Discuss the advantages of each. Then indicate which you prefer and why?
Recently, playing individual or team sports has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what are the advantages and disadvantages of these?". Whereas it is a widely held view that playing individual has more benefits, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the public perspective standpoint, team sports are bound up inextricably with group, which indicates they lead to both captain and bests player. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between football match and sports heroes as well as an exponential increase in winner team. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of adventuring sports is correlated positively with not only collaboration but also spirit sport.
Within the realm of psychology, without the slightest doubt, individual exercise attribute to less adventure, in that it would come down to more relaxation, less stress, and ethical behavior. A salient example of such attribution is Olympic games, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take hard-working for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint poor management problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to international heroes, academic study, and even team working traits. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of government to provide more sports facility and sports encouragement.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the advantages of the playing team sports outweigh individual playing. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1207.87684729 141% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83848797251 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1399195404 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2889478577 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.692307692 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113584019803 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368622477739 0.0925447433944 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442393301491 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768651732527 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537656664767 0.0609392437508 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 11.5310837438 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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