Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that wealthy countries should help undeveloped countries with humane assistance in the time of natural calamity. This essay agrees with this statement because victim nations require immediate help in terms of food, clothes, medicines, etc. Developed countries have enormous resources and they can help instantly during the disaster period.
Victim countries are in the aid of prompt relief for the time of natural catastrophe. Most of the time disaster impacts are very high and it is hard for people to come back to routine life. In that time people require basic needs such as food, shelter, water, clothing, and healthcare. In the 2001 Gujarat earthquake also known as the Bhuj earthquake many people suffered, lost their homes and family members. At that time, most of the countries around the world donated funds to Gujarat people.
Rich Countries should always be ready to do any kind of assistance to poorer countries with kind-hearted. Because they have huge wealth to do instantaneous help during a natural disaster. This will help the affected people to recover to their normal life quickly. During the Kerala flood 2019, several developed countries all over the world gave their hands to the needy people who got affected by the flood.
To conclude, richer countries always should ready to give their hands to the poorer countries that get affected by a natural calamity because poorer countries require more aid during the crucial situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to poorer countries with kind-hearted. Because they have huge wealth to do instantaneo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21008403361 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50592124143 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542016806723 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4354451755 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3846153846 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32299959125 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108670530685 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971353840404 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200139910474 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776436330805 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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